Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

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Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

Postby sbarret » 21 May 2010, 02:47

It's here if you're interested. It's an oldie but I cleaned it up some (just proves I HAVE learned a little something in the past few years, eh?)

It's pure fluff w/ no real point, but I still enjoy it...
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Re: Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

Postby Athena » 22 May 2010, 08:37

I enjoyed it as well :-)
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Re: Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

Postby Sacchi » 22 May 2010, 08:55

Very tasty fluff, without the over-sweet stickiness of the marshmallow variety. I enjoyed it very much.
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Re: Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

Postby PaulaO » 22 May 2010, 09:44

Nice! And very real.
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Re: Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

Postby deej » 22 May 2010, 12:34

Very cool.
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Re: Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

Postby Proofrdr » 22 May 2010, 13:52

Well done, Sandra :-)
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Re: Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

Postby Nurse Jo » 23 May 2010, 07:51

A lovely story Sandra. Thanks :)
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Re: Updated MOTEL DAZE and popped it up online

Postby sbarret » 24 May 2010, 11:14

Glad you all enjoyed it!
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