2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby FranW » 06 Nov 2010, 09:16

He looks MUCH better like that rofl
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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby Garza » 06 Nov 2010, 09:25

And so now when you start to let your internal editor take control, just wrap up ol' George's head and get on with writing another paragraph <geeez, I'll probably get kicked off the board for hijacking your thread with Geo. Bush! Sorry 'bout that!>
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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby FranW » 07 Nov 2010, 08:02

Paranormal SF: 3200 words.
We lie together in the darkness, my head on her shoulder. She strokes my cheek, cups her hand over the curve of my head. Under her gentle touch, my leopard spots dissolve and I resume my human form. Orgasm drives me into cat form whether I will it or not.

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“Child, you look lovely. Like a fairy princess.” As I made my curtsey, my god-mother leaned forward and clasped a pearl necklace about my throat. White roses, white pearls, white skin, white brocade gown. My looking glass reflected back the image of a bridal corpse.
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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby ElaineB » 08 Nov 2010, 09:52

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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby TeriasM » 08 Nov 2010, 23:38

Garza wrote:And so now when you start to let your internal editor take control, just wrap up ol' George's head and get on with writing another paragraph <geeez, I'll probably get kicked off the board for hijacking your thread with Geo. Bush! Sorry 'bout that!>


Nice, I had no mental image for my internal editor. A duct taped Dubya is perfect.

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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby Sacchi » 09 Nov 2010, 01:56

FranW wrote:Paranormal SF: 3200 words.
We lie together in the darkness, my head on her shoulder. She strokes my cheek, cups her hand over the curve of my head. Under her gentle touch, my leopard spots dissolve and I resume my human form. Orgasm drives me into cat form whether I will it or not.


Leopards do have retractable claws, don't they? I think cheetahs are the only cats who don't, but I'm often wrong.
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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby ElaineB » 09 Nov 2010, 02:13

You're right, leopards do, cheetahs don't. But where did she mention them?
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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby PaulaO » 09 Nov 2010, 09:28

Don't you keep YOUR nails trim, Elaine? (blinks innocently)
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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby Sacchi » 09 Nov 2010, 13:16

ElaineB wrote:You're right, leopards do, cheetahs don't. But where did she mention them?


She mentioned leopard spots and changing into a cat during orgasm. I was just hoping the leopard form had enough presence of mind even at such a time to refrain from extending claws. Ouch. Sorry, it was just a lame joke.
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Re: 2010 -- FranW -- Short and Shorter

Postby FranW » 09 Nov 2010, 19:48

Ah, first drafts. I'll clean up the cat species later.
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